While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environment problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In
this
modern era,
due to
cutting down trees creates an unusual environment in society. Nowadays, people believe that the major dispute of the current
world
is pollution.
Moreover
, others think that removing
forests
is the most important issue in the
world
. In the following, I would like to discuss both scenarios.
Firstly
,
due to
the heavy population in so many countries, there is a huge no. of people using vehicles which are driven by fossil fuels leading to global warming. There are quite a lot of situations which are producing worse atmospheric conditions.
Secondly
, most of the cities having industries which are emitting harmful gases and liquids into nature which leads to globalisation in the cities
For Instance
,
due to
pollution, the ozone layer which protects people from ultraviolet rays is depleting that causing many skin diseases in society. On one hand, large industries are logging in
forests
for the wood which is leading to deforestation.
This
is a big problem for both humans and animals. As the
forests
are the main sources of rain.
Additionally
, constructing buildings is another reason for the extinction of natural vegetation in the country. In the same way, Forest fires are
also
one of the reasons for the decrease in
forests
. In conclusion, global warming and deforestation both are quite dangerous problems in the
world
. The main reason behind
this
situation is
due to
humans. Vehicles emit toxic gases into the atmosphere and cut down
forests
for the use of wood in making furniture, toys and other items. These all
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create a dangerous condition for the environment of every country in the
world
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global warming
  • Deforestation
  • Pressing environmental problem
  • Devastating impact
  • Rising temperatures
  • Polar ice melting
  • Sea levels
  • Coastal communities
  • Extreme weather conditions
  • Hurricanes
  • Droughts
  • Marine biodiversity
  • Ocean acidification
  • Biodiversity loss
  • Ecosystem disruption
  • Carbon dioxide absorption
  • Climate change
  • Food scarcity
  • Desertification
  • Interlinked environmental issues
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