Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others?

While

economic growth can be

one

of the methods to indicate the prosperity of some nations, some individuals argue that other indicators are still essential.

This

essay will discuss other

factors

which play equally important roles and explain why I believe that taking everything into consideration, everyone is equal and no

one

should have privilege on those

factors

. Even though the growth of the economy can benefit residents in

one

country

, it is still crucial to consider the

overall

happiness

of citizens. That means whether successful or not a

country

is

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not only depends on how wealthy its

people

are

,

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but

also

needs to evaluate how happily those

people

live.

Although

everyone is rich enough to afford their lives including daily necessities and luxuries, they still can feel uncomfortable if they have unhealthy bodies or insufficient company from their loved ones.

For example

,

according to

the annual Japanese government report, its gross domestic productivity is increasing every year, but

people

living there feel less happy than before, which is a major threat to their

country

. When considering both economic growth and the

overall

happiness

of citizens, I think that everyone should have the same rights to take advantage of the development of these

factors

.

That is

because

people

are born to have equal rights, which include access to life necessities for survival,

such

as freshwater or sunlight, freedom to make decisions for themselves, and unbiased opportunities for educational and medical resources. If a society allows someone the privilege

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those rights, it can be impossible for the majority of

people

living there to be happy, leading to the failure

instead

of the success of that

country

.

For instance

, the American colony was full of discrimination against races before the establishment of the United States and no

one

can agree that the American continent had a successful society at that age. In conclusion, even if the development of the economy is

one

important factor which can affect the prosperity of

one

nation, the

overall

happiness

of citizens is another measurement which needs to be considered. Taking both economy and

happiness

into consideration, every person should have

the

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equal right to those

factors

because equality is equally important to indicate the success of that society.