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The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans

The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans
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The given diagram depicts the information about the steps that are indulged in the
process
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 of
cocoa
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beans
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.
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, the
process
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 of
cocoa
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beans
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 involves three stages. All the steps are interlinked with each other, omission of any step may halt the whole diagram. After analysing the
process
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 chart it can be seen clearly that in the first stage, the whole
cocoa
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beans
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 are picked, and removed shells before drying. In the second stage, the
process
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 of pressing is separated into two methods: pressing and refining. Before refining to
cocoa
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beans
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, industrial chocolate and sugar are added. The
process
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 chart
further
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 collates that in the pressing method, after pressing it is converted into
Cocoa
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 cake. In the subsequent step, it is ground. After grinding it is transformed into
cocoa
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 powder and liquor. Ultimately, chocolate products are ready to be distributed in the shops.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, cocoa, beans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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