Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sport, while others think it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People
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have different views regarding, the companies
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providing sponsorships to some
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sport
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events or teams. Some argue that
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it is a
way
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to advertise the
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in a unique
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and it is betterment for that particular
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, others argue that, it can affect
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in a negative
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. In
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essay, I shall discuss both views and give my opinion. Nowadays, we can see that, many companies are sponsoring the events or sponsoring the
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of a particular
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. It is beneficial for both
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parties
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because it can promote the
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and the
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or the
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gets financial aid. And
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that, more
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get interested in
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sports. Eventually, it gets famous and more opportunities open in the world of
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, we can see on
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the cricket
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ground
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, there are many hoardings of companies available near the stadium or logos on the
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sponsored
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's shirt. And, it can get recognition in that
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.
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, some
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companies
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products, that are harmful to
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also
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get famous. And young
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can get addicted to those products as well.
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, it impacts
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society in a bad
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, a pan masala
company
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sponsors a particular
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sport
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team
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. So, its logo has to be on
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team's
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the team's
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jersey. And
people
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get to know about
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harmful stuff. Sometimes, players promote it as a sponsorship contract. Young children
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these players and consume
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. But, in my opinion, the authority of any particular
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should consider
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matters and think about it before getting sponsorship from these kinds of
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company
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companies
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. Which can create
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influence on young minds.
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, yes, to get monetary aid,
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sport
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events or teams should have sponsors. But, they should keep in mind that, some products influence the community in a negative
way
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sponsorship
  • advertisement
  • financial support
  • visibility
  • popularity
  • athletes
  • excel
  • healthy competition
  • commercialization
  • fair competition
  • profits
  • well-being
  • exclusion
  • less popular sports
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