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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Nowadays, many people seem to prefer reading
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, the introduction of
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 may have some benefits and drawbacks. On the one hand, reading electronic
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 has some disadvantages. The first drawback of
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 would be the eye effect. People who take too much time to read on visual displays of electronic devices or phones have often suffered from eye diseases
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 as nearsightedness, farsightedness, or blindness. Another disadvantage is that it costs more money to prepare.
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 means if we start reading
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, we have to spend a large amount of money to buy electronic tools
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 as phones, tablets, and laptops
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 install the Internet at home.
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, the benefits of reading
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 far outweigh its disadvantages. First of all, electronic
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 are very easy to access for all ages. By swiping the screen and searching for
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, reading
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 is available for everyone
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 of going to bookstores and choosing the kind of book we want.
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, electronic
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 have more reasonable prices than paper
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 if we have enough necessary devices. Digitization brings us the chance to store documents or many kinds of
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 at a cheaper price. With only a small amount of money and an electronic tool, we can store countless
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 or documents.
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, a Harry Potter hardcopy book can be found in stores for more than 700,000 VND,
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 a copy of
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 significant to many people reading them, and electronic
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 are becoming popular among all generations.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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