It is a good idea for people to continue working beyond retirement age. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many elderly people are working after

retirement

. It has been suggested that working beyond

this

age is good for them. In my opinion, they should not work after

retirement

. It is my view that being retired, older folk have the chance to relax and do their favourite activities which they did not have the time to do as an employee.

For instance

, they can read more books and spend most of their time with their relatives. Thanks to

retirement

, they have more hours to enjoy their friends.

In addition

, working retirees bring about a lack of job opportunities for younger who need jobs and money

for providing

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their families with their basic needs.

For example

, in societies that suffer from economic problems, most retired citizens are unable to access necessities for life.

Consequently

, they are forced to work. Since job opportunities are limited, the young public is deprived of having a career.

In contrast

, some nations claim that retired persons are more likely to suffer from depression. They firmly insist that retired populations who stay at home and do not have a career face depression.

For instance

, I, personally, know a few relatives who after

retirement

became depressed and spent most of their hours in a room and do not communicate with others.

However

, I do not find

this

argument convincing as they can join clubs and link with peers in regular activities. In conclusion, I completely disagree with doing work for the retired population because they should relax and do their favourite activities.

Also

, youngsters are able to reach more job opportunities.