The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The former chart gives information about the differences in
households
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with electrical appliances and the latter chart displays how much time
households
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spent doing housework in a country from 1920 to 2019.
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it is clear that
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all the appliances had increased during
this
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period, following that refrigerator had a greater
rose
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. At the same time, the number of
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that spent time doing housework had a slight drop. Washing machines were the most common appliances in
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in 1920, which was 40% and increased slightly and
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had risen to 73% in 2019 with a small dip in 1980. Nearly a third of
households
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owned a vacuum cleaner in 1920 and had a slight rose to half in 1940, it did not reach 100% until 2000. In comparison, most
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didn't have refrigerators in 1920.
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, it increased dramatically from over half in 1940 and got 90% in 1960, eventually reaching 100% in 1980.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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