Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.Mecky
Dear Mecky,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I recently received your complaint letter about disturbing noise from my apartment, and I wanted to address it immediately.
Firstly
please accept my sincerest apologies for this
issue that you need to face. This
noise was primarily due to
some repair work that had to be done urgently in my apartment. A pipe was brust
and ruined my all furniture and electronic stuff Correct your spelling
broken
that is
why I need to call the repair team to get the pipe repaired. They were using heavy tools to fix this
issue, which I understand must have been disruptive.
I deeply regret the inconvenience this
caused and I assure you this
will never happen again that is
why I am taking some further
steps to prevent further
disturbance. I have already spoken to the repair team to ensure that any remaining work should be done between appropriate hours, from 10AM to 4 PM, to minimize disruption
Thank you for your understanding and patience. Please feel free to reach out if there's anything further
I can do to address this
issue.
Warm regards,
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grammar vocabulary
Make sure to proofread your writing for minor errors and typos, such as 'brust' instead of 'burst' and 'this will never happen again that is why I am' which needs a comma after 'again'.
task response
Try to enhance your introduction and conclusion for a more engaging response. You might want to add a friendly note thanking the neighbors for their patience again at the end.
coherence cohesion
Strengthen the logical sequence of ideas by breaking down complex sentences or combining shorter ones for clarity. For instance, you can elaborate a bit more on the impact of the burst pipe before jumping into the future actions.
suitable writing tone
Your letter is polite and considerate, addressing the neighbor's concerns in a respectful tone. This matches well with the task requirement of using a suitable writing tone.
complete response
You provide a clear reason for the noise (emergency repair work) and specify the action you'll take to minimize future disruption. This is effective in achieving the task response.
logical structure
You've structured your paragraphs to generally follow the prompt: explaining the reasons, apologizing, and then describing next steps, which contributes to a logical structure.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite