Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is generally believed that most criminals commit more
offenses
after serving the first sentence. Change the spelling
offences
People
should consider why this
is happening and how to solve this
problem
. This
problem
can be solved in two solutions; using technology and giving longer punishments
.
To begin
with, Most of the offenders
commit crimes because of their stress. After they served the sentence, they want to
revenge Fix the infinitive
apply
to
the Change preposition
on
victims
since they consider that they are locked in jail because of the victims
. For example
, criminals send messages or letters to victims
that they will visit victims
’ houses after they finish their punishments
. Also
, they got too much stress in jail, they want to commit more offenses
as they did. Change the spelling
offences
Consequently
, most criminals cannot control their impulsive minds, they will commit crimes again.
Then
, people
should consider deeply how this
problem
can be solved. There are two solutions I thought. First,
judges should give longer punishments
to offenders
. They have to know what results they get if they hurt someone. Offenders
cannot commit crimes easily anymore if punishments
are long. Second,
people
should use technology like lie detectors to know whether they reflect themselves. For instance
, if they don’t reflect themselves, judges should increase their punishment. People
cannot really know their minds, but technologies can analyze offenders
’ minds. Thus
, using these solutions, people
should resolve this
problem
.
In conclusion, Offenders
keep hurting someone and give permanent wounds to victims
. It is a serious problem
for all people
because they don’t know their future. If people
can solve this
problem
, the world will be more peaceful.Submitted by haeunueah06 on
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