Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In juveniles,

according to

some

people

developing a sense to compete with other

people

should be motivated. Whilst, some

people

think teenagers who are taught to collaborate rather than to compete become more helpful in the future. In my opinion,

people

should develop the

ability

to compete against others. Developing the

ability

to compete with others is useful for youngsters in their future life because it helps them to increase their confidence. Teenagers will have higher goals and eventually, they will do hard

work

to achieve their goals.

Moreover

, they will give their best in every situation whether it will be a game or to score good grades in class.

For instance

, in Asian ,countries most parents urge their kids to study hard

instead

of letting them play with their friends because parents

also

feel a sense of competition.

On the other hand

, some

people

think it will be better to develop the

ability

to collaborate with others because he will assist

people

in their

work

. He will

work

for the betterment of society and it will eventually create bonding between them.

For example

, if a job holder will contribute to helping other employees and workers, it will automatically lead the company to grow more. It is very common that

this

will

also

lead to the failure of the company

due to

wrong information or management, but a person with the

ability

to compete will do hard

work

and motivates his colleagues to

work

harder.

To conclude

, developing a sense of competition will encourage a person to achieve more and more in his life but collaboration is not always possible with the same energy.