A TV company is going to make a new program about a place near your home. Write a letter to the head of the production company. In your letter explain how you found out about the TV program say how you know the place where they plan to film suggest some information about the place that could be included in the TV program

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Dear Sir I recently found out about your upcoming track 'Sher-E-Punjab' which is going to start its telecast in the month of November on the most popular television channel "India Times''. As I was travelling back to my home from work, I saw the advertisement for

this

program in the metro. I know

this

area extremely well because the historical museum is located just a stone's throw distance from my house. Honestly,

this

museum is a gorgeous place and contains all the data related to Sikhism.

Moreover

, if you are unsure about certain facts

then

there is an extremely beneficial feature installed in their headphones as soon as the individual goes and stands in front of the portrait, a human behind starts talking about its significance and its history.

Furthermore

, when you cross the museum

and

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apply

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at the end

, there is one model of Jalan Wala Bagh

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placed on the table.

According to

me,

this

must be included in the show as

this

will attract a gigantic number of viewers. I really hope

this

TV show will gain popularity. Yours sincerely Nav.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that the structure of your letter flows logically, connecting ideas smoothly between paragraphs. Transition words could be used more effectively to improve clarity and create a seamless reading experience.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a clear and consistent idea within each paragraph; avoid mixing various details or suggestions without clear organization.

task achievement

Fully develop your letter to address all the points in the task prompt. Make sure to explain how you found out about the TV program, discuss your familiarity with the filming location, and offer detailed suggestions for the program.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is generally suitable for the context, but strive for a balance between formality and friendliness, appropriate for writing to the head of a production company.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

183 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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