A TV company is going to make a new program about a place near your home. Write a letter to the head of the production company. In your letter explain how you found out about the TV program say how you know the place where they plan to film suggest some information about the place that could be included in the TV program
Dear Sir
I recently found out about your upcoming track 'Sher-E-Punjab' which is going to start its telecast in the month of November on the most popular television channel "India Times''. As I was travelling back to my home from work, I saw the advertisement for
this
program in the metro.
I know this
area extremely well because the historical museum is located just a stone's throw distance from my house. Honestly, this
museum is a gorgeous place and contains all the data related to Sikhism.
Moreover
, if you are unsure about certain facts then
there is an extremely beneficial feature installed in their headphones as soon as the individual goes and stands in front of the portrait, a human behind starts talking about its significance and its history. Furthermore
, when you cross the museum and
Correct word choice
apply
at the end
, there is one model of Jalan Wala Bagh is
placed on the table. Unnecessary verb
apply
According to
me, this
must be included in the show as this
will attract a gigantic number of viewers.
I really hope this
TV show will gain popularity.
Yours sincerely
Nav.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the structure of your letter flows logically, connecting ideas smoothly between paragraphs. Transition words could be used more effectively to improve clarity and create a seamless reading experience.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear and consistent idea within each paragraph; avoid mixing various details or suggestions without clear organization.
task achievement
Fully develop your letter to address all the points in the task prompt. Make sure to explain how you found out about the TV program, discuss your familiarity with the filming location, and offer detailed suggestions for the program.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is generally suitable for the context, but strive for a balance between formality and friendliness, appropriate for writing to the head of a production company.