The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The given page presents amounts of
shops
that shut down and amounts of new
shops
that opened in the country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the
number
of
shops
that closed and the
number
that opened both saw a large fluctuation during the given period.
However
, closing outstripped opening in all years except in 2011 and 2015.
To begin
with, the line of closures started at around 6.300 and In 2015, and the
number
went up and down between 6,000 to 7,000 until 2015. In 2015, not even more than 1,000 new
shops
were turned off.
However
, the
number
of openings surged to 5,100 in 2016 and steadily kept at that level until 2018.
on the other hand
, about 8.500 openings happened in 2011 and it had a significantly decreasing, which was only beneath 4000 in 2012.
In contrast
, the
number
went above 6,000 in 2014. Afterwards, it shows another dropdown in 2015, which dropped to 4,000.
Although
it kept from 2015 to 2017, it finalized as 3,000 in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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