summarise the information by selecting and reporting the descripyion of the correlation of the table that follow

This
table presents
the
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information about death from
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of
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countries in 2005.In the present society
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many teenagers like drinking
alcohol
,when they have a party and celebrate various festivals.
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data in the table talk about
number
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of
deaths
from
alcohol
. The
country
with the highest total
number
of
deaths
was
Czech
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the Czech
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Republic,
that
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is 1369000
people
with
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males
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have
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having
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900000
people
and
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females
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,
469000
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people
by
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consumption per capita,2002
is
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132 litters.
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there is
a
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country
with the lowest
alcohol-related
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number of alcohol-related
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deaths
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Lithuania,
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all
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total
125000
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of 125000
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people
. Divided into
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Males
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and
Female
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Females
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,112000 and 13000 respectively. Additional information is drinking per capita,2002 is 91
liters
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. There is
also
Germany Australia Ireland Canada and Estonia. There is a total
1185000
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913000 582000 580000 383000 respectively. The
number
of male
deaths
from
alcohol
is
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the nation is highest,Germany and the least
country
is Lithuania. The
number
of female
deaths
from
alcohol
is
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in
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the nation is
highest
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the highest
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,
Czech
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The Czech
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Republic and the least
country
is Lithuania
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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