You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words. In your letter ointroduce yourself odescribe your plans for the party oinvite your neighbour to come

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Hello Sir I am Cole Garrett, your new neighbour and have recently relocated to

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town. I am writing to invite you to a party at my house in the evening on the

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Sunday of

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month. As

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is the first house that I bought from my income, I want to celebrate

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event with my loved ones to share my happiness,

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is why, I am organizing

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party. To make

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day more exciting, I am planning to play some competitive games with the guests

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as Musical chairs, Pictionary, Head Band and so on. There will be dance and music during the whole time. As I am planning

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party on the patio, it may create some nuisance to your day-to-day proceedings, so if you suggest to me some changes in the plan, I would definitely those take into consideration. I would like to reiterate my invitation and apologize if I create any trouble for you. Please write me freely. Waiting for your response Yours truly Gurjot Kaur

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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