Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

On our days, the number of native tongues spoken is declining. In
this
essay, we will discuss why we should protect the dying idioms
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the consequences that losing these languages will have on our cultural heritage and how
this
will affect our society.
Firstly
, losing a
tongue
entails the disappearance of the
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to that
language
and that’s irreplaceable. To illustrate, the loosing of the Latin
language
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is relegated to academic purposes and fewer people choose to learn Latin every year.
As a consequence
of
thus
, a lot of historical information written in Latin will be incomprehensive and, for that reason, we will lose a huge amount of historical and cultural data. For these reasons, maintaining the languages is vital for our cultural development.
Secondly
, the societies tied to these dialects may disappear if the
language
does. A mother
tongue
is a cohesive agent among the population all around the world. And,
as a result
of the death of the native
tongue
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those boundaries may disappear,
thus
dismembering the society.
For example
, the Guarani dialect spoken in Perú by the Peruvian natives is a seal of identity among the native communities.
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consequence
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of the loss of the Guarani, the indigenous people will suffer the loss of one of their most valuable heritages.
To conclude
, the actual number of idioms in danger represents a problem
due to
the amount of cultural heritage
that is
in danger of being lost if that
language
dies.
Also
, the societies that spoke that
language
as a mother
tongue
may see their bonds disappearing with their native
tongue
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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