Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
On our days, the number of native tongues spoken is declining. In
this
essay, we will discuss why we should protect the dying idioms and
the consequences that losing these languages will have on our cultural heritage and how Correct word choice
apply
this
will affect our society.
Firstly
, losing a tongue
entails the disappearance of the culture bound
to that Add a hyphen
culture-bound
language
and that’s irreplaceable. To illustrate, the loosing of the Latin language
that
is relegated to academic purposes and fewer people choose to learn Latin every year. Correct pronoun usage
apply
As a consequence
of thus
, a lot of historical information written in Latin will be incomprehensive and, for that reason, we will lose a huge amount of historical and cultural data. For these reasons, maintaining the languages is vital for our cultural development.
Secondly
, the societies tied to these dialects may disappear if the language
does. A mother tongue
is a cohesive agent among the population all around the world. And, as a result
of the death of the native tongue
those boundaries may disappear, Add a comma
tongue,
thus
dismembering the society. For example
, the Guarani dialect spoken in Perú by the Peruvian natives is a seal of identity among the native communities. In
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As
consequence
of the loss of the Guarani, the indigenous people will suffer the loss of one of their most valuable heritages.
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a consequence
To conclude
, the actual number of idioms in danger represents a problem due to
the amount of cultural heritage that is
in danger of being lost if that language
dies. Also
, the societies that spoke that language
as a mother tongue
may see their bonds disappearing with their native tongue
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