In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
In the present society, there are many different types of
families
. Some families
have general infrastructure. Moreover
, many families
have changed from the past. In the following paragraphs,both views on this
topic will be discussed in detail.
this
essay talks about family in the past. Infrastructure of family, the head of the family is a father who is responsible for taking care of family members.For example
, he has to work to earn money for family expenses such
as diet, travel and children's educational expenses. Moreover
, there is a mother who takes care of everything in the house such
as cooking, cleaning the house and so on, but they all had to do their best. Some families
live together independently because of the decision of the father or mother. Not only do their own duties but also
have a common orderly living.
This
paragraph talk about of
family in present society. Change preposition
apply
However
many family
coexist with democracy everyone can express Change to a plural noun
families
your
own opinion. Some family has the head of the family Correct pronoun usage
their
is
the mother. Everyone helps each other in every way or everything. That's good. Unnecessary verb
apply
In
Change preposition
This
this
article will demonstrate the good relations among family members. Additionally
in my opinion i think We can depend on each other regardless of who's duty and that will bring us closer together.
In conclusion
will talk about the differences Add a comma
,conclusion
of
both views. The two opinions have positive and negative, It depends on each person's family structure. The advantage Change preposition
between
in
the first article is that they will have an organized family layout. In the second Change preposition
of
article
there is an advantage that they can be interdependent.Add a comma
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