The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The line graph illustrates how many overseas

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travelers

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to the

coast

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, the mountains, and the

lakes

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of

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from 1987 to 2007.

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, there was a noticeable increase in the

number

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of

visitors

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in

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the

coast

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. When it comes to

mountain's

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visitors

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, they experienced a slight rise.

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the

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lakes

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rates

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. The

number

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of

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travelers

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of

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the

coast

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was 40000 in 1987.

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rate was a slight decrease to just below 40000 between 1987 and 1992. There

were

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a significant rise

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number

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coast's

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visitors

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to over 7000 from 1992 to 2007. When it comes to

mountains'

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, they were 20000 in 1987.

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, the

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of

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mountains

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rose slightly to over, 20000 from 1987 to 2007.

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, there were 10000

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in 1987. During the next

decade

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rate was noticeably rise to 40000. From 1997 to 2002, the

number

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increased significantly to more than 70000. Unfortunately, there was a significant decline in the

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of

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travelers

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of

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to approximately, 50000 between 2002 and 2007.‌‌