More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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problem

of extra height becomes more and more relevant these days. Indeed, there is no

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doubt

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issue must be solved,

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, there is still no

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ideal solution. Let's try to look at

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situation from different perspectives. Some people assert that the

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of fast food prices could be a resolution,

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plan has a huge

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disadvantage

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that the main problem of

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is

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financial problems,

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people can not afford

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fresh healthy food, so they have to take

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cheaper one

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.

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, the

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the price would rather get worse, because men would start

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feeding

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even worse and their life would become harder.

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,

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suggestion could cause

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mental problems

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physical ones. I assume that

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society should pay attention to the

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extension

of life level, namely try to make healthy products

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available

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all classes.

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to mentioned before, there is

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evidence against assuming suggestion. There is a widely known

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effect, which

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sense

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is in the pattern that the more

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, the more desired.

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means that if somebody tells the person what he does not

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to do, the

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want to do

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thing.

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to say, making conditions worse would not help the situation. In conclusion, I would disagree with the statement

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the topic. I think we should improve the

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economic

situation to make good products cheaper

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of

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or

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up the fat food consumption.