The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019
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charts are the percentages of the main reasons why teenagers in one African nation use their handphones in four distinct years.
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, Social networks displayed the highest result
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the survey
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each year.
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, phone calls remained the most unpopular feature during the given periods even though the data slowly increased from 2016 to 2017. Upon
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observation, social
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figure,
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dominant reason for using
handphone
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, started at around 50% in 2016 and slightly declined to around 48% in 2017.
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a bounce back in 2018 and 2019 which accounted for around 52% and 60%, respectively.
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, the utilization of email in young
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devices continuously decreased from a quarter in 2016 to only 19% in 2019 despite the fact that it was still the second most
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device usage. Turning to the
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result, the ratio of
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using digital camera feature through their gadgets went up gradually from only 15% in 2016 and met a peak
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a fifth in 2019.
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, it is evident that the proportion of calling friends by phone fluctuated from around 10% in 2016, experienced a rise in 2017, and
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rapidly plummeted to only 5% in 2019.
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