The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019
Presented in
pie
charts are the percentages of the main reasons why teenagers in one African nation use their handphones in four distinct years.
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in
each year. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, phone calls remained the most unpopular feature during the given periods even though the data slowly increased from 2016 to 2017.
Upon further
observation, social networks's
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networks
the
dominant reason for using Change preposition
as the
handphone
, started at around 50% in 2016 and slightly declined to around 48% in 2017. Fix the agreement mistake
handphones
However
, there were
a bounce back in 2018 and 2019 which accounted for around 52% and 60%, respectively. Change the verb form
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Subsequently
, the utilization of email in young people
devices continuously decreased from a quarter in 2016 to only 19% in 2019 despite the fact that it was still the second most Change noun form
people's
reasons
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reason
of
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for
the
device usage.
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others
result, the ratio of Correct quantifier usage
other
teenager
using digital camera feature through their gadgets went up gradually from only 15% in 2016 and met a peak Add an article
a teenager
around
a fifth in 2019. Change preposition
of around
Lastly
, it is evident that the proportion of calling friends by phone fluctuated from around 10% in 2016, experienced a rise in 2017, and then
rapidly plummeted to only 5% in 2019.Submitted by zia_ardhi on
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