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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#businesses #emphasise #products #development
Today, businesses are extremely common kind of activity
therefore
 most businessmen do their best for clients
choose
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 them. They use
of
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the
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a
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 blatant
way
 of making their product popular- saying that
products
 are new which, from my point of view, is
quite
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quite an
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 appropriate
way
 of advertising.
Majority
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 of people consider that new
products
 have higher quality than the old ones, thereby
products
 which are new in some
way
 are, mostly,
and
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preference.
Hence
, businesses have an opportunity to leverage
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this
 belief and increase their income.
For example
, in 2020, when „Kylie Cosmetics” experience a decline in purchases, staff started adding new useful components
in
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 their
products
,
started
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 creating new lines of decorative cosmetics in order to attract more
clints
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clients
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. Mentioning new things about a product in
advertisments
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advertisements
 should not be counted as a negative improvement. Because there is not something bad in informing people about product’s development
,
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 if it
geniunly
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genuinely
 became newer.
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such
advertisings
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 are really convenient for content-maker, for people who are responsible for goods’ popularity. They do not have to wonder a lot about how
make
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product
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a product
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 famous, but can write about new elements in it, definitely, if they exist, in fact.
Furthermore
,
businessman
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businessmen
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 can attract more purchasers and gain more money in a
way
 which does not do any harm
for
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to
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 clients.
That is
 profitable and useful for either
business
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businesses
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 or buyers. In conclusion,
this
 kind of
advertisments
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advertisement
are
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 very popular and it is explainable. It,
also
, cannot be considered
as
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a negative development as no one suffers from it, no one complains and it is normal in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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