In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Today, businesses are extremely common kind of activity

therefore

most businessmen do their best for clients

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them. They use

of

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the

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a

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blatant

way

of making their product popular- saying that

products

are new which, from my point of view, is

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appropriate

way

of advertising.

Majority

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of people consider that new

products

have higher quality than the old ones, thereby

products

which are new in some

way

are, mostly,

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preference.

Hence

, businesses have an opportunity to leverage

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this

belief and increase their income.

For example

, in 2020, when „Kylie Cosmetics” experience a decline in purchases, staff started adding new useful components

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their

products

,

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creating new lines of decorative cosmetics in order to attract more

clints

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clients

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. Mentioning new things about a product in

advertisments

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advertisements

should not be counted as a negative improvement. Because there is not something bad in informing people about product’s development

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if it

geniunly

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genuinely

became newer.

Also

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such

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are really convenient for content-maker, for people who are responsible for goods’ popularity. They do not have to wonder a lot about how

make

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product

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a product

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famous, but can write about new elements in it, definitely, if they exist, in fact.

Furthermore

,

businessman

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businessmen

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can attract more purchasers and gain more money in a

way

which does not do any harm

for

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to

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clients.

That is

profitable and useful for either

business

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businesses

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or buyers. In conclusion,

this

kind of

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advertisement

are

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very popular and it is explainable. It,

also

, cannot be considered

as

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a negative development as no one suffers from it, no one complains and it is normal in society.