The company you work has decided to close the cafeteria, as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director Give reason of low usage How will it affect the staff Suggest ways to improve it

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Dear Sir My name is Jas. I am an employee of your office. I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am not happy with your decision that you made our office

Cafeteria

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will be closed.

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, It will be more difficult for everyone in the company because most of the employees depend on

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Moreover

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, the food and the drinks are expensive which is not accurate for

staff

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members, our salaries are still the same but the food prices are continuously increasing since

last

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year.

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, Our

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is not spin and span. It needs to be renovated because there is not much space for sitting which is why

staff

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feel suffocated and uncomfortable.

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during summer days the situation is really bad because Air Conditioner is not working properly. The most important thing is the other

staff

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member

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; janitorial and Kitchen

staff

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will lose their jobs as well which is not good for their future. I think we need to focus on

Cafeteria

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which needs to be cleaned all the time and the food prices need to deteriorate. Waiting for your prompt response. Yours sincerely Jas

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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