The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
These provided maps illustrate that when an
island
was empty,
then
, some facilities were built to serve tourists.
Overall
, it can be seen that
although
the
island
was like a desert, some trees grew in it.
To begin
, a beach was on the west side of the
island
, but nobody could swim there.
In contrast
, swimming activity was allowed after
buildings
were established.
In addition
to that, the
island
did not contain any homes. After that, tourist
buildings
were set up for the accommodation of visitors. Even though trees were not demolished, a restaurant was built to make different kinds of food for tourists, and a reception was made in the centre of the
island
to introduce a lot of services to foreigners.
Moreover
, there were ships to transfer people to the
island
, but they were not available before.
Furthermore
, footpaths were designed between
buildings
,
hence
; visitors could enjoy walking. There were two types of
buildings
to accommodate tourists, the first ones were set up in the middle of the
island
, but the others were set up on the west side.
Also
,there was a vehicle track was made to facilitate parking, but it was not set up before.
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