The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.
This
map illustrated the town called Felixstone between the years 1967 and 2001. Over the years the town, some either replaced or moved to got developed over the last
few decades.
on the left of the map, the hotel was bigger in 2001 than in 1967 and in 2001 it had a car park beside it also
. they also
added wind turbines behind the seas.
In the middle of the map, compared to 1967 and 2001 there are more shops in 2001 than in 1967 in the high street. The Marina,fish market and Pier was replaced with a Public coast and the cafe was now located at the centre of the town. beside the public ,beach there was a private shore. Adding more, above the private seaside, in 1967 there was a farmland but it was changed into a hotel with a swimming pool and tennis court. To conclude
, the other aspect of 1967 that remained unchanged was the golf course.Submitted by lilinsia12 on
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