you have seen an advertisement in Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for 6 month in look after their 6 year old child. write a letter to the parents. In your letter. - explain why you would like to the job - give details for why you would be a suitable person for employee -say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing
this
letter to you to discuss the position that was posted in the weekly Australian magazine last
week. I am a student at Algoma University which is near your dwelling and I have been in Australia since May 2023. Along with
my studies, I am looking for a job to manage my expenses.
Moreover
, I have been studying early childhood diploma since this
summer. I have a vast knowledge of how to take care of a child. The schedule of my upcoming semester is interesting. I only have to attend school for two days, rest of the lectures are synchronous.
Apart from that, I have been doing a volunteer job at a childcare centre which is located near my institute. This
helps me to analyze my spare time and learn new things in my leisure time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Harpreet KaurSubmitted by harpreet291kaur on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea relevant to the topic and presented in a logical order.
task achievement
Expand on your points to fully develop your response to the given tasks. Elaborate more on why you would like the job and how you plan to spend your free time in Australia.
coherence cohesion
Use a more varied range of cohesive devices to improve the flow of ideas between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
Ensure that the job advertisement's requirements are fully addressed in your letter for a complete task response.
task achievement
Avoid personal details like your full name in the example provided as the IELTS Writing Task does not require such information.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,