some people think that schools are no longer necessary because people can aquire information on the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

internet

has been one of the most important inventions of

human

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, which brought significant changes to urban societies and it is becoming more and more popular, as far as

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many gravitate toward

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point that the

internet

is a proper replacement

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schools

,

however

, I refute

this

view because of sundry reasons which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. Since

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children are passing through a crucial phase of their life, their social skills must be monitored to a large extent. In order to overcome challenges, not only do they improve their knowledge, but their communication skills must be enhanced.

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, by attending

schools

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they gain a chance of keeping in touch with their peers and learn how to establish a successful relationship,

additionally

, addressing some problems alone is roughly insurmountable, which requires

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work

as a group so as to solve them,

for instance

, in cut-throat competition era that companies are involved in, at no time do they outpace the rivals if they do not have teams to

work

in a harmonic way, so, as

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future

labor

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, children must be guided on how to

work

as part of a group.

On the other hand

, some people support the view of using online sources

instead

of going to

schools

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. To support

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viewpoint, they argue that acquiring data from the

internet

is much less

time consuming

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and does not need to allocate weighty funds,

while

it seems that devastating results of immersing on the

internet

such

as becoming

isolated

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person and unpleasant behaviours are overlooked by them. I,

therefore

, admire

schools

because they shed light on the path to a better for our loved ones and reform their improper ideas and behaviours. In conclusion, despite the fact that the

internet

is more reasonable in terms of time and budget, the pros of group

work

, social skills and having constructive ideas and

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far outweigh online learning. so, in my opinion,

schools

are tremendously crucial, and it is suggested that more efficient methods of learning should be introduced by using

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at

schools

.