The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of
people
who join in 4 different kinds of
sports
in a specific region from 1985 to 2005. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that Tennis had the highest
number
of
people
who participate in
sports
whereas
Rugby had the lowest
number
of
people
in a specific area. (There was a similar downward trend in both Basketball and Badminton in the
number
of participants in 4 different kinds of
sports
between 1985 to 2005). From the information shown on the line graph, it can be seen that Rugby had the lowest
number
of players.
However
, Rugby increased significantly to about 250 players in 1985 but it dramatically declined about from 250 to 50 players between 1985 to 2005. Compared to the first half of the period, in the rest of the time shown the chart, it can
also
be observed that Tennis had the biggest
number
of participants. Between 1985 and 2005, there was a substantial increase of 75 participants in the
number
of
people
joining
sports
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, sports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • participation
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • stability
  • popularity
  • regional interest
  • key trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • local leagues
  • school programs
  • media influence
  • public health initiatives
  • availability of facilities
  • competitive success
  • fluctuations
  • impact
  • major tournaments
  • notable players
  • local clubs
  • coaching programs
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