The charts below give information about the typical temperatures in London, New York, and Sydney as well as total hours of sunshine for each city.
The line graph clearly illustrates the changes in average temperatures per month in
London
, New York
and Sydney
. Additionally
, the given table graph demonstrates how many hours
the given cities
exposure to sunshine in a year.
Overall
, the changes in the given data about the temperature
in New York
and London
are quite similar to each other, however
, in Sdyney these amounts are different from those in the given other two cities
.
To begin
with, The temperature
in London
in January is almost double amount of the New York
's heat with approximately 8 Celcius and nearly 4 Celcius respectively which are the coolest in both cities
. In contrast
, at the same time, Sydney
sees the highest temperature
in 12 months at just under 30 Celcius. In July, both New York
and London
live the hottest days at average
of 25 Celsius, Add an article
an average
however
, Sydney
's temperature
significantly decrease and this
month is the coolest one in 365 days.
Secondly
, New York
has the highest total annual hours
of sunshine with 2535 hours
. The second one is just 62 hours
lower than the highest amount and this
city is Sydney
. Moreover
, London
has about 50 sunny days in a year and this
figure is the lowest among the three cities
.Submitted by gficnm
on
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