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More and more people want to buy clothes, car and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, many
people
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 want to purchase clothes,cars and other items from famous
brands
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.Mostly because
brands
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 are linked to better quality and manufacture,and can be safer to deal with
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 other smaller businesses.
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 it has some benefits, I believe it's a negative development, for unfortunately it can lead to smaller businesses going bankrupt.
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 reason for buying products from
brands
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 is to get higher quality at a good and fair price.
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, when dealing with well-known shops ,the buyer can leave the doubt of being scammed to rest.
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 is because shops
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 have a reputation to maintain.
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, it can be seen as a sign of wealth for the majority of the
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.
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, Many
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 prefer a Japanese car over a Chinese
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 for its name , even though Chinese cars provide much better services.
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 negative
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brands
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 cause
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 is that
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 may often neglect unknown products,making it harder for many to make a living.Another
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 ,is many companies don't care for the environment and cause much damage. in conclusion,
brands
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 have many benefits, from good quality to other things,but relying on them too much can be bad for other businesses.
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