More and more people want to buy clothes, car and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many
people
want to purchase clothes,cars and other items from famous
brands
.Mostly because
brands
are linked to better quality and manufacture,and can be safer to deal with
then
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other smaller businesses.
Although
it has some benefits, I believe it's a negative development, for unfortunately it can lead to smaller businesses going bankrupt.
one
reason for buying products from
brands
is to get higher quality at a good and fair price.
For example
, when dealing with well-known shops ,the buyer can leave the doubt of being scammed to rest.
This
is because shops
such
as
this
have a reputation to maintain.
Secondly
, it can be seen as a sign of wealth for the majority of the
people
.
For instance
, Many
people
prefer a Japanese car over a Chinese
one
for its name , even though Chinese cars provide much better services.
One
negative
brands
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cause
,
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is that
people
may often neglect unknown products,making it harder for many to make a living.Another
one
,is many companies don't care for the environment and cause much damage. in conclusion,
brands
have many benefits, from good quality to other things,but relying on them too much can be bad for other businesses.
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