PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE OBESE. What are the reasons of this problem and how can this be solved?

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essay, it will be debated about

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and presented with the best solutions, Which is

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a healthy lifestyle. To start with, Being like

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condition to us, There are a lot of reasons.

Firstly

, eating fast foods,

that is

, hamburger, pizza and like these meals. It leads to

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condition.

Secondly

, After consuming, Immediately, Lying down

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bed is

unpleasure

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position.

Thirdly

, not doing sports causes to be obese.

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,

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always follow

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rules

for

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get rid

ofbecoming

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of becoming

becoming

obese. In the second body, written sufficient recommendations

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are utilizable for people.

Firstly

, We must decrease fast foods, why is

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mentioned? Cause, inside

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this

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food ingredients, There are fattening things,

that is

artificial products.

Secondly

, we need to keep balancing, after, eating various meals. And, The

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, that plays a crucial role in our

life

,

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is

sport

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. People ought to do sport on a

basicly

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basis

.

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, every day, running will bring a healthy

life

, provides good shape and mood,

loose

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extra weight,

Thus

, There are useful sides. Mostly, Sport it will bring up to be a tolerating person. If we perform these tasks we can

loose

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lose

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or get rid

ofoverweighting

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of overweighting

overweighting

and our

life

turn into a beautiful

existance

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existence

. In conclusion, In short, it must be kept

balance

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for all things, whether, It is essential or not,

besides

necessary

works

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. After performing those rules, our

life

turn

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into

be

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good

positions

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.