The mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have a great influence on people’s ideas today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People tend to receive information about news, lifestyles, or entertainment by various means of communication

such

as

television

, radio, and

newspaper

.

Along with

technology developments, individuals are shifting to other tools like social

media

or online

magazine

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as the source of knowledge.

However

, I greatly agree with

second

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opinion.

Firstly

, there are various types of

television

programs that are

showed

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to audiences.

Television

broadcasters produce many kinds of

genre

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genres

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to grab diverse viewers.

For instance

, sport is one of the spectacles that has many crowds. English Premier

league

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, the

world

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world's

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most outstanding football competition, is

being

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the target of many TV

Channel

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channels

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to become official broadcast

partner

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partners

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because they have large fanatic fans.

While

it is often said that the number of

television

audiences continuously

decline

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,

television

will remain the primary medium

due to

its extensive coverage for the next several years.

On the other hand

, people nowadays prefer to get

the

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new information with their own

gadget

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especially

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from social

media

(TikTok, Instagram reels, and YouTube short) and online news

platform

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platforms

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.

This

trend is

happened

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because of the increasing

of

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the

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internet penetration number so that

individual

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individuals

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can access

the

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information

by

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anytime and anywhere as far as they have devices. My father used to cannot read

newspaper

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the newspaper

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if the officer did not deliver it to my home.

However

,

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the Newspaper

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company has transformed regardless

the

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of the

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change

of

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in

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customer behaviours.

For example

, Tempo, the leading

newspaper

producer for several years in Indonesia, has announced to discontinue

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of their

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their

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its

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printed paper edition and move to

online

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bulletin.

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it is true that

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the boomer’s

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boomer’s

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generation sometimes

get

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difficulties

to

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following

this

trend, the

millennial

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and Gen Z will persuade older people to use it. In conclusion, TV, radio, and

newspaper

still have their own customer even though their positions gradually are dethroned by internet-based means. I believe that today's society will choose the

media

that is

the easiest to reach and start leaving traditional mass

media

.