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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Abby, I trust
this
 letter finds you well! I'm excited about your plan for a camping holiday
this
 summer and wanted to share some insights to make your experience even more enjoyable. Camping offers a unique sense of freedom, allowing you to immerse yourself in nature. Given your passion for cooking, the camping setting will add a delightful twist to your culinary adventures. Picture yourself cooking rice in a simple
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 box – it's a culinary experience like no other!
However
, it's fair to mention a couple of considerations. Summertime camping can attract a fair share of bugs, which might be a bit bothersome.
Additionally
, be prepared for intermittent mobile signal issues at the camping site. Connectivity might be a challenge, but that's
also
 an opportunity to disconnect and fully embrace the outdoor experience. I would love to join you
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this
 camping venture, but unfortunately, I've already made plans to visit my grandparents with my parents during the summer holidays.
Nevertheless
, I'm eager to find another time for us to go camping together. Perhaps we can plan a trip later in the year when our schedules align. Looking forward to seeing you back in school and hearing all about your camping escapades! Best wishes, Yuyi
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coherence cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph exclusively focuses on a single aspect you're discussing to improve clarity and coherence.
coherence cohesion
Keep working on the logical order of ideas, perhaps by introducing a disadvantage immediately after the corresponding advantage, to create a balanced argument within the letter.
task achievement
Ensure you expand on both positives and negatives to sufficiently cover all parts of the task and demonstrate a full response.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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