chart shows the number of crimes in each year, for three different areas of crimes from 2003 to 2012 in Newport city.

chart shows the number of crimes in each year, for three different areas of crimes from 2003 to 2012 in Newport city.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for chart shows the number of crimes in each year, for three different areas of crimes from 2003 to 2012 in Newport city.
The chart shows the
number
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of crimes each year, for three different areas of crimes from 2003 to 2012 in Newport City. The shared information showed how Burglary recorded the highest
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,
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dipped through the years.
On the other hand
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, car theft witnessed some decrease
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again recorded the same
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of
cases
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, and robbery was slightly fluctuating. By 2003 Burglary recorded almost 3400
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by 2004 had peaked at the highest
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of almost 3750
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,
then
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dipped down quickly to record the lowest
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in 2008 which was approximately 1200
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with little fluctuations but kept within
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limit until 2012.
However
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, car theft recorded the highest
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of about 2750 by 2003
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testified a slight decrease to record the lowest
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of almost 2000
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in 2006,
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again gradually increased to achieve the same
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of
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in 2012.
Finally
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, by the year ,2003 the robbery had recorded approximately 700
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,
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through the years had kept fluctuating with almost a similar
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of
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every year until 2012.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cases with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dipped" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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