The map show the changes that took place in the bookstore before and after 2000.
The map illustrates the changes that occurred in the bookstore from 2000 to the present.
Overall
, only locations of the service desk, travel books
' and new books
' shelves remained constant while
other categories
relocated throughout the period.
In 2000, wide
shelf on the left of the entrance was full of Correct article usage
the wide
fiction
books
including the part at the end
of the wall. Non-fiction
books
used to be adjacent to the service desk which took place on the right side of the entrance. Art, hobbies and cookery books
were in between the non-fiction
and fiction
categories
, vertically.
In the present design, the fiction
shelf is divided into five categories
where art books
take place in the closest location to the entrance and followed by hobbies, cookery, fiction
and non-fiction
categories
, sequentially. There are also
three new tables with four chairs each, in front of the cafe for the customers. The size and shape of the bookstore did not alter over time.Submitted by mirayturan01 on
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