The diagram bellow shows the proses by which bricks are manufactured for building industry.
A diagram illustrates which
bricks
are manufactured for the building industry
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This
diagram will give information about brick manufacturing, on the picture we can see 7 stages of brick manufacturing
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Firstly
, want to make Linking Words
bricks
they use a digger car to dig clay. Use synonyms
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Secondly
they take clay to the metal grid and it will fall into the roller. Add a comma
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Thirdly
they mix the clay into sand and water and take it to a wire cutter to change Linking Words
bricks
or they pour the mixing solution into the mould.
Next stage they will bring the brick to the drying oven and wait for it dry for about 24 and 48 hours. After ,that they bring it to the kiln and moderate it to about 200Use synonyms
*C
– 980Use synonyms
*C
, next they increased the temperature to about 870Use synonyms
*C
– 1300Use synonyms
*C
, and after heating they cool the chamber for 48 – 72 hours.Use synonyms
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Finally
they bring out and package and delivery Add a comma
,Finally
bricks
to the construction company. Use synonyms
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is all of the stage Linking Words
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manufacturing diagramsUse synonyms
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