The diagram bellow shows the proses by which bricks are manufactured for building industry.

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A diagram illustrates which

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are manufactured for the building industry

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This

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diagram will give information about brick manufacturing, on the picture we can see 7 stages of brick manufacturing

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, want to make

bricks

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they use a digger car to dig clay.

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Secondly

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they take clay to the metal grid and it will fall into the roller.

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they mix the clay into sand and water and take it to a wire cutter to change

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or they pour the mixing solution into the mould. Next stage they will bring the brick to the drying oven and wait for it dry for about 24 and 48 hours. After ,that they bring it to the kiln and moderate it to about 200

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– 980

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, next they increased the temperature to about 870

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– 1300

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, and after heating they cool the chamber for 48 – 72 hours.

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they bring out and package and delivery

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to the construction company.

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is all of the stage

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manufacturing diagrams

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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The diagram bellow shows the proses by which bricks are manufactured for building industry.

#4 Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas. What are the main reasons for this? What solutions can you suggest?

Eco-tourism often involves visiting remote and fragile ecosystems, which raises concerns about the impact on local cultures and indigenous communities. What problems can this cause? How can these problems be resolved?

Nowadays it is seen that people celebrate other cultures within their local cultures, do you think it is good for our society?

The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You are going for a one-week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should: thank her/him and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do.