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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling center from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling center from 2011 to 2015.
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The bar chart below shows the diagram of misuse collected by a recycling centre between 2011 to 2015.
It is clear that
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 the amount of misuse throughout the years was similar and only fluctuated slightly.
Additionally
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, paper
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 was the most collected type
while
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 the garden at the least. From 2011 to 2012, and 2014 to 2015. The
waste
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 collected has the same structure. Even though the data for each year was different but it is noticeable that paper always the most being wasted, followed by glass, tins and
lastly
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 was garden
waste
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. There was a slightly different in
waste
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 in the year 2013. Surprisingly, glass became the largest amount of
waste
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, with almost 50 oodles.
Secondly
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 rank was paper with 8
tons
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 difference, tins and garden
waste
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 have approximately
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 of
waste
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, with 34
tons
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 and 31
tons
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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