The maps underneath describes the changes that have taken place in and around Queen Mary Hospital since its building in 1960 till 2000
The maps below show
replacement
in the area around Queen Mary Hospital for three different years. As the Hospital remains in the same block over the year Fix the agreement mistake
replacements
as well as
the car park area.
In the year 1960
there were only 4 blocks with equal proportions, which are the Hospital located on the right corner facing the main road with a Car park across it. On the left side of the Add a comma
,1960
Hospital
there was a Shopping Add a comma
,Hospital
centre
. Across the Shopping centre
, Farmland was built .
In the year 1980, The Shopping centre
was replaced with two building side to side of the same size, those were the Cancer centre
and the Pharmacy. In
addition
Farmland was Add a comma
,addition
also
replaced with Nursing School building.
Moreover
in 2000 Cancer centre
was expanding, Capitalize word
Centre
it
took over the Nursing school block. Where the Nursing school was downsized to be half of the car park area. Correct word choice
and it
While
the other remained the same.Submitted by gianinasastra on
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