Write a letter to a friend inviting them to go on vacation with you. Include Why you want to go on holiday Where you want to go Why you want them to come with you

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Dear Ripon, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

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letter to invite you formally to go on a vacation with me end of December 2023. Precisely, I always love to travel to different beautiful places inside the country, especially abroad. As you know, Eid is one of the most important festivals for Muslim people, and we will get seven days long holidays during the upcoming Eid. The main reason for travelling outside the country is to get relaxed

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to come out of the monotonous personal and professional life. I have made a five-day plan to travel to Kashmir, India as Kashmir is best known as the heaven

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earth. Kashmir is

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a place, where you will enjoy the picturesque views of Sonmarge and Gulmarg. You will

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enjoy the beauty of Baisaran Valley which is known as "Mini Switzerland" in Asia. During

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trip, we can taste traditional Kashmiri food, especially dry foods and

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, travelling alone outside the country is costly,

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why I am requesting you to join me on

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short trip. I strongly believe that accommodation, transportation, and food costs will be very low if we travel together on a sharing basis.

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to hear from you soon regarding

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matter. Yours lovingly, Faisal

faisalmahamoodTue Nov 21 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. Refrain from combining unrelated details that can disrupt the logical progression of your argument.

coherence cohesion

While your greeting and closing are appropriate, consider varied sentence structures throughout your letter for a better flow of ideas and to keep the reader engaged.

task achievement

Task response is comprehensive with clear reasons for the holiday, the chosen destination, and why you want your friend to join you. Yet, consider expanding your reasoning by including personal anecdotes or prior experiences that have led to your choice, strengthening your argument further.

task achievement

You've maintained a suitable informal and friendly tone throughout, which is great for a letter to a friend. Keep this consistent tone in all informal correspondence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

226 words

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