The diagram shows natural process life cycle of a butterfly from the egg stage, through 4 phases from caterpillar to fully grown butterfly.
The diagram shows
natural
process life cycle of a butterfly from the egg stage, through 4 phases from caterpillar to fully grown butterfly.
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the natural
Initially
, the eggs grow into grub from which chrysalis and
develop in it. The caterpillar has a long Correct word choice
apply
mustache
. They eat leaves and has Change the spelling
moustache
unusual
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an unusual
color
. In one moment worm turns Change the spelling
colour
in
Change preposition
into
cocoon
, but continues to grow. In about 8-15 days the butterfly emerges from the chrysalis and every single time they have unique Add an article
a cocoon
the cocoon
colors
.
Once the butterfly emerged Change the spelling
colours
they
spread Correct pronoun usage
it
their
wings and live Correct pronoun usage
its
their
life, but Correct pronoun usage
its
unfortunately
they live about 2-3 days. They reproduce sexually and the females lay eggs, Add a comma
,unfortunately
then
the cycle repeats endlessly.Submitted by dnm.best on
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