Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage dose plastic do the environment? What can be done government and individuals to solve this problem?

The problem of
plastic
shopping
bags
and disposable
plastic
bottles
, and the effects of
this
on the environment
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is always debatable, and has now become more controversial. Many people calming that it is hazardous
while
others reject
this
notion.
According to
my perception,
this
problem is damaging the environment badly and if the government cannot stop
these production
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, people will face serious side effects in future. There are a myriad of reasons that will
further
explain these arguments, but the most powerful one stems from the fact that
plastic
bags
and
bottles
cannot disappear easily it takes too much time. Another pivotal aspect is that
plastic
packaging and
bottles
are floating on the sea.
Hence
, it is apparent that the excessive usage of these
items
causes many
environment
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problems.
Furthermore
,
plastic
items
may decrease the beauty of the earth and
causes
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many
disease
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owing to these usages because when people burn these they converted
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CO2 which is
also
very harmful
for
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the
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humans. The steps to deal with these problems are many, but the most significant ones are not complicated but acceptable and practical.
Besides
, the government should ban these
plastic
products and replace
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alternative products like
plastic
bottles
replace with glass or tin
bottles
and
plastic
bags
interchange with paper
bags
.
Moreover
, individuals do not through after usage of these
items
into sea sides because it is very dangerous for the sea animals. And even dispose
these
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plastic
items
in designated places because it is very lightweight and fly with air anywhere and
causes
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many accidents. To recapitulate,
according to
the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion that the environmental problems can be successfully addressed, provided that the above stated-measures are taken.
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