The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releven.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releven.
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The graph provides information about the statistic of shop
closures
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and
openings
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from 2011 to 2018. The graph's
number
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shows 0 to 9, 000.
Firstly
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, it is notable that the lowest figure of
closures
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in
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2015. The figure for
openings
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in 2015
also
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decreased than the previous year, 2014,
on the contrary
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, the
closures
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' reduction is much larger than the
openings
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. Its
number
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decreased more than five times. Interestingly, after 2015, the
closures
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'
number
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is rising again,
in contrast
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, the
openings
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'
number
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continues to decline, despite a brief boost in 2017.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
openings
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and
closures
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in 2018 are both lower than in 2011.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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