The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releven.
The graph provides information about the statistic of shop
closures
and openings
from 2011 to 2018. The graph's number
shows 0 to 9, 000.
Firstly
, it is notable that the lowest figure of closures
in
2015. The figure for Add a missing verb
was in
openings
in 2015 also
decreased than the previous year, 2014, on the contrary
, the closures
' reduction is much larger than the openings
. Its number
decreased more than five times.
Interestingly, after 2015, the closures
' number
is rising again, in contrast
, the openings
' number
continues to decline, despite a brief boost in 2017.
Overall
, the number
of openings
and closures
in 2018 are both lower than in 2011.Submitted by ehlight22 on
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