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The woman`s place is in the kitchen. To what extent do you agree?

#woman`s #place #kitchen
Many argue that a female's place is in the
kitchen
 because they believe it's her duty and responsibility towards her husband and children.Others disagree, thinking
women
 have a higher meaning
then
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 just cooking, cleaning ,and
such
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other things. I think every
women
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woman
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 should decide on her own what she wants to do in her life . The main reason why some believe that a woman's place is in the
kitchen
 is culture and traditions that have been passed down by a number of generations making it much more difficult to bring in a new concept of
women
.
For instance
, many countries in Africa value
such
 traditions and will disown their daughters or maybe even kill them for bringing shame by not following these harsh traditions.Another reason could be how simple it is ,by getting the girl a husband that she cooks for parents can rest assured that their daughter is safe,rather than having her in a faraway college not knowing what she's doing.
On the other hand
, many females believe that staying in the
kitchen
 is torture, and shouldn't be forced to do
such
 a thing.
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 they should be studying or searching for their special talent and providing for themselves,and a large number of
women
 have already proved that it is possible.
For example
, the famous Sireina Willams who is a pro tennis player, makes a large amount of money, so she's able to depend on herself. In conclusion, a female's place in the
kitchen
 is simply old culture,and people should respect a
women
's right to what she wants in her own life.
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