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n the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the coming days,
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due to
 advancements in technology,
people
 will read things online without paying a single penny
therefore
people
 will not buy printed
books
 or
newspapers
. I somehow agree with
this
 statement.
However
, some
people
 will still prefer to buy printed materials as reading online content cause a lot of pressure on the eyes. In the future,
due to
 technology, it will be easy to view multiple
newspapers
 without spending a single penny. Newspaper agencies will provide news for free.
However
, they will earn money from ads or other sources.
Furthermore
,
People
 will download
books
 and
newspapers
 to their devices and will be able to read them anywhere anytime.
For instance
, before the era of the internet and technology, I used to carry many printed
books
 with me to my university but now I just carry one laptop.
Moreover
, a lot of options are available online to download different
books
 for free.
On the other hand
, many
people
 still prefer to read
books
 or
newspapers
 in hard form. In my opinion, there will be some
people
 in the future who will still prefer to read
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printed
books
due to
 many reasons. One of those reasons may be a medical condition because some
people
 can’t see a computer or mobile screen for a longer time. Reading on mobile phones put great stress on the eyes which is why they will avoid screen and will pay for printed
books
 or magazines. In conclusion, many
people
 will prefer to read
newspapers
 or
books
 online for free. They will be able to read multiple
newspapers
 without spending any money.
In contrast
, some
people
 will still prefer to pay to read printed
books
 or
newspapers
due to
 medical conditions like screen phobia etc.
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