When children start school , teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often thought that
teachers
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have a great influence on both intellectual and social aspects of
children
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’s development when they
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to
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. In my opinion ,
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agree with
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point of view because
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teacher
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teachers
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teach them how to raise their intellect in
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and
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how to build a relationship with a person
Firstly
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, in
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,
teachers
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teach
children
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practical
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exercises
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and laboratory experiments which help them understand the experiments and significantly help increase their
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,reasoning and thinking logic .
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Teacher
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The teacher
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will teach
students
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the way how to answer the question in the problem which will make the
children
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understand the nature of the problem.
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,
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the chemical
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teacher
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will teach the reason why the molecules are linked together and how to separate them , they
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teach the
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how to make the chemicals which will make them understand
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nature. So
teachers
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have a great impact on
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intellectually.
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, when
children
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come to
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,
teachers
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can help
students
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participate in
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activities
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such
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as group
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dances
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, fun
activities
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, etc. Those
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help the
children
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improve
social
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the social
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skills that they will need in the future.
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in
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,
teachers
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will teach civics education courses to help
children
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have a better understanding of society .
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,
teachers
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teach
children
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how to join social
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, they will help them get on well with everyone or they will teach
children
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about some social aspects.
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is necessary for the
students
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because they will very
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it in the future. So
that
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,
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the teacher
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teacher
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also
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have
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a great influence in
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children
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have a good social skill
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,
it is clear that
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teacher
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teachers
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have more impact on
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students
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students'
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live
more
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than their
parent
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parents
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,
ensure
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they are
well developed
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well-developed
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socially and intellectual
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Structured learning environment
  • Cognitive skills
  • Social interactions
  • Pedagogical techniques
  • Moral values
  • Emotional well-being
  • Complementary roles
  • Academic and social education
  • Individualized attention
  • Life skills training
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