When children start school , teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often thought that
teachers
have a great influence on both intellectual and social aspects of children
’s development when they being
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bring
school
. In my opinion , i
agree with Change the capitalization
I
this
point of view because teacher
teach them how to raise their intellect in Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
school
and also
how to build a relationship with a person
Firstly
, in school
, teachers
teach children
practical exercise
and laboratory experiments which help them understand the experiments and significantly help increase their Fix the agreement mistake
exercises
problem solving
,reasoning and thinking logic .Add a hyphen
problem-solving
Teacher
will teach Add an article
The teacher
students
the way how to answer the question in the problem which will make the children
understand the nature of the problem. For example
, chemical
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the chemical
a chemical
teacher
will teach the reason why the molecules are linked together and how to separate them , they Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
also
teach the children
how to make the chemicals which will make them understand the
nature. So Correct article usage
apply
teachers
have a great impact on children
intellectually.
Finally
, when children
come to school
, teachers
can help students
participate in school
activities
such
as group dance
, fun Fix the agreement mistake
dances
activities
, etc. Those activities
help the children
improve social
skills that they will need in the future. Correct article usage
the social
Also
in school
, teachers
will teach civics education courses to help children
have a better understanding of society . For instance
, teachers
teach children
how to join social activities
, they will help them get on well with everyone or they will teach children
about some social aspects. This
is necessary for the students
because they will very need
it in the future. SoCorrect quantifier usage
much need
that
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apply
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the teacher
a teacher
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teachers
also
have
a great influence in Change the verb form
has
help
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helping
children
have a good social skill
Conclusion
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In conclusion
it is clear that
teacher
have more impact on Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
students
live Change noun form
students'
student's
more
than their Correct quantifier usage
apply
parent
, Fix the agreement mistake
parents
ensure
they are Wrong verb form
ensuring
well developed
socially and intellectualAdd a hyphen
well-developed
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