When children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When observing

children

embarking on their study path, some people believe that

teachers

’ effect on

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intellectual and social growth is much bigger

while

others are against

this

view. From my perspective, there are certain merits and demerits of

this

situation because both

parents

and

teachers

hold essential influences. On the one hand, the impact of tutors comes from their professional knowledge

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is considered

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the more efficient method to teach and instruct students. Tutors are carefully trained at highly educational institutions and use academic documents published by the national educational system.

Therefore

, they have enough necessary skills, knowledge and patience to help

children

internalize the most exact and adequate information.

Furthermore

,

teachers

create a sociable environment and organize plenty of collective activities.

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this

way,

children

can gradually socialize with age friends and

also

enhance their mental and physical health.

On the other hand

,

parents

affect

children

in numerous ways as well.

Firstly

, students have stayed with their

parents

since they were newborn babies, so there is a strong belief between them.

Therefore

,

children

are likely to trust

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what their

parents

teach and remember it easier and faster.

Secondly

,

parents

can spend more time

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children

than

teachers

who have to manage so many

children

. They can guide their offspring more slowly and cautiously to achieve the best result.

Moreover

,

children

can be affected by

parents

' acts and sayings

as a result

of imitation. In conclusion, not only

teachers

and

parents

but

also

all people around

children

have

influence

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on

children

in many ways.

However

, the impact of

teachers

and

parents

is

more

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outstanding and

can no

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cannot

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be underestimated.