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When children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many believe that
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 are more significantly influential in educating children to develop their intellectual and social growth than
parents
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. From my perspective, if a child can develop comprehensively, it is paramount for him or her to be nourished and educated in a comprehensive environment comprising of both education instructors and
parents
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.
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,
parents
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’ roles should be underestimated. On the one hand, it is undoubted that
teachers
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 have considerable effects on children in terms of intelligence and social skills
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 their professional qualifications. Instructors are
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 to teach
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, so they are likely to demonstrate their techniques or teaching methods which could greatly support the development of
kids
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 by delivering various classroom activities.
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, by having students attend numerous group work assignments
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 and interactive games, not only can
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 cultivate their learners’ interpersonal skills, but they can
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 enhance students’ smartness by asking them to
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 their tasks.
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,
parents
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 can
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 greatly affect their offspring’s development by devoting themselves to their
kids
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, and by expressing good characteristics for
kids
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 to follow.
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, by spending time playing different games ranging from physical to intellectual games,
parents
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 can facilitate their
kids
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 to develop both physically and mentally.
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,
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 could be good examples for
kids
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 to learn and follow with their qualities.
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, whether a child is reared by confident, flexible, and outgoing
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,
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 child will become a sociable individual and perform better communication skills.
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, it is important for children to live and learn in
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 a
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 environment during their initial stages.
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, both
teachers
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 and
parents
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 should join hands to educate offspring for the sake of their development.

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