The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of the
amount
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number
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of
phones
by the top five mobile phone manufacturers sold globally in the years 2009, 2011, and 2013.
It is clear that
Nokia had the highest number of
phones
sold globally in 2009 and 2011,
however
,
Samsung
became the most popular among these phone brands in 2013.
Samsung
and
Apple
saw the biggest increase in sales over
this
5-year period. In 2009, Nokia sold nearly 450
million
mobile
phones
, which was almost double the number of
phones
sold by the second most successful manufacturer,
Samsung
.
However
, over the next four years, Nokia’s phone sales decreased by approximately 200
million
units,
whereas
Samsung
saw an increase of a similar amount. By 2013,
Samsung
became the market leader with a selling number of close to 450
million
units. The other three top-selling handset brands between 2009 and 2013 were
Apple
, LG, and ZTE. In the year of 2009, these companies sold around 25
million
, 125
million
, and 50
million
mobile
phones
respectively, but
Apple
surpassed the other two manufacturers in 2011. In 2013, units of
phones
sold by
Apple
had reached 150
million
, whilst LG saw declining sales and the figures for ZTE rose only slightly.
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  • Global sales
  • Mobile phone brands
  • Market share
  • Trends
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Technological advancements
  • Innovation
  • Consumer preferences
  • Demographics
  • Market dominance
  • Brand loyalty
  • Comparative analysis
  • Sales figures
  • Data interpretation
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