The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate how the layout of
student
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housing building changed over the course of 13 years, beginning in 2010. In general,
this
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place changed substantially over the period.
In particular
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, there are more private rooms than in the past. On the left side of the map, the hall in 2010 included one
kitchen
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, one bathroom and living
room
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, three study/bedrooms and one main hall. The main entrance was located in the west and opposite the bedroom. The
kitchen
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was in the middle of two study/bedrooms.
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, the living
room
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was situated in the north and surrounded by a garden.
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, the bathroom was opposite the
kitchen
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and private
room
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. On the right side of the map, the remarkable transformation is that a garden is replaced by
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car parking.
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, the bedrooms are extended from 3 to 5 rooms.
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, in the hallway, a private
room
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is constructed near the private
room
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.
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, the
kitchen
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has been expanded to serve as a social area for all residents, and the living
room
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is converted into a bedroom.
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, the bathroom is unchanged.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words kitchen, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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