The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how the layout of
student
housing building changed over the course of 13 years, beginning in 2010.
In general, Correct article usage
the student
this
place changed substantially over the period. Linking Words
In particular
, there are more private rooms than in the past.
On the left side of the map, the hall in 2010 included one Linking Words
kitchen
, one bathroom and living Use synonyms
room
, three study/bedrooms and one main hall. The main entrance was located in the west and opposite the bedroom. The Use synonyms
kitchen
was in the middle of two study/bedrooms. Use synonyms
Besides
, the living Linking Words
room
was situated in the north and surrounded by a garden. Use synonyms
In addition
, the bathroom was opposite the Linking Words
kitchen
and private Use synonyms
room
.
On the right side of the map, the remarkable transformation is that a garden is replaced by Use synonyms
the
car parking. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, the bedrooms are extended from 3 to 5 rooms. Linking Words
Additionally
, in the hallway, a private Linking Words
room
is constructed near the private Use synonyms
room
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
kitchen
has been expanded to serve as a social area for all residents, and the living Use synonyms
room
is converted into a bedroom. Use synonyms
Finally
, the bathroom is unchanged.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words kitchen, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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