You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to inform you regarding the next course meeting.

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, I will not be able to attend the class. Allow me to explain

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the details.

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, I am a third-year majoring in Graphic Design.

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how to utilize software like Adobe Photoshop and Illustrator, integrating them with AI. Unfortunately, I will have to take my father to Santonio to do his regular medical check-up because he has heart complications, with all my family members heavily occupied with work.

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, as the eldest son, I have taken the responsibility of caring for my father during his medical treatment. I would like to request a

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leave of absence for next week to address

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pressing family issue.

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if you can grant my request. Thank you for considering my request and looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Jun

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Single idea per paragraph

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