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student shuold spend time working before begining their University studies.

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A section of society believes that students need to work after finishing high school. In certain areas around the world, high academy graduates are encouraged to take a gap year before attending college. I advantage with the idea and will explain the reason why. Young people are encouraged to work for a year between finishing high faculty and starting university studies. To be honest, many individuals should have a career after going through
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 institute. But there is a lot of happens when doing the job.
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, working enlistment thinks that money is more critical than studying. Or they can injure
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, when they do the job, there are many negative happens to traverse. When students struggle, they can improve their knowledge. They will experience the taste of independent lifestyles. They can utilise it to deal with a difficult life. The man is reluctant
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. They need to accept their mistakes and start to broaden their perspectives. They can prevent a gift and feel proud when they are adept at something. Working to make money to help their parents. They can study about poised on the edge of the tired life. We need to cultivate enough knowledge and skills to make ourselves change. Working is good to work part-time to make money and get experience.
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 take advantage of studying and improving basic skills to start university. You can spend time working but you can not forget to study. All people should plan for many
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