The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the graph illustrates four types of vehicles comprising diesel and

pedro

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petrol

cars, lorries and

buses

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. It can be seen from the graph that the amount of

nitrogen

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oxide

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emissions released by

buses

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make

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makes

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up the highest amount of

nitrogen

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oxide

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discharges in presumable each velocity.

In contrast

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, diesel and

pedro

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petrol

cars emit much littler than

buses

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and lorries, both maintaining at virtually 10

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per speed.

According to

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the line graph, 40

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is produced at the speed of 10

kph

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for

buses

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. But from there,

nitrogen

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oxide

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emissions started to decline continually to around a quarter (25)

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at the speed of 60

kph

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After

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this

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, it started to increase consistently and made just over 42

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which is highest at the speed of 130

kph

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. For lorries, just under 35

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is manufactured at 10

kph

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then

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it continually

decline

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declines

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until a fifth (20)

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at 80

kph

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Then

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it,

jump

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jumps

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up minimally to 25

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at 130

kph

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. For diesel car,

nitrogen

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oxide

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emissions

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are

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used at

lowest

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the lowest

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speed. The minority 5

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is produced at 10

kph

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and it

remain

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remains

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stable until at the highest speed of 130

kph

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. At

last

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, petrol car produced 10

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at the speed of 10

kph

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and remain

same

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the same

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until 110

kph

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but

then

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it started to rise slowly and produced 12

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at 130

kph

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Vocabulary: Replace the words buses, nitrogen, oxide, g, km, kph with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

226 words

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